Edit of Ozma and Stuck in Silence
Just wrapped up a late night edit of Ozma and Stuck in Silence. I've written a few takeaways below, and as always, if you'd like to get...
Understanding Polyphony in Writing in Visit from the Goon Squad
Hey all, Here's a paper I wrote on how to use the contrast and concert of the different voices of a novel (character / authorial / etc.)...
Using interiority to express a character's thoughts
As someone who started as a screenwriter, getting into a character's head has always been a bit of a challenge for me since I switched to...
Children's book and short story edits
Well, last night we dug into an awesome piece of children's fiction and a fun speculative short story. I wanted to share a few of the...
Learn how to develop resonant characters with this Final Boss Tutorial!
This is our first of a series of tutorials on developing stories. Tonight we talked about developing resonant characters using the...
I wanted to share an example of a paid edit
One of the awesome writers I've worked with gave me permission to use the notes I wrote up for her screenplay an an example of my paid...
We Edited Demon Priestess and ProLOGue
Tonight we took a look at a few stories that play in the fantastical realm. I have our video review and line-by-line notes posted below,...
Editing the novel "The Life Interstellar"
The last human child on a water mining outpost is raised by a spider and uncovers the colony's dark secret. We took a look at the first...
Editing "I Shall be Released" and "42 Days"
In a late night editing session, we took a look at a script from one of our awesome Twitch contributors, Gregory Mandarano...
Editing the Laser Sloth
In our edit, we read over one of our twitch follower's awesome children's screenplays and comment on how to make an animal sidekick story...
