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Compound sentence

A compound sentence joins two or more independent clauses of equal weight, linked by a coordinating conjunction, a semicolon, or a colon — 'the lock turned and the door swung in'.

The lock turned, and the door swung in. Two clauses that could each be a sentence, joined as peers. The coordinating conjunctions are and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet; a semicolon does the same job with more pause and no stated relationship.

Coordination makes a claim about the two halves: they matter the same amount. That is the right claim surprisingly often — He rang the bell, and nobody came gives both facts their due — and the wrong one whenever a sentence is really about one thing with a condition attached. When every sentence on a page is compound, the prose reads as a list of equally important events, which is another way of saying nothing on the page is important. The fix is usually a complex sentence: demote one clause and the other rises.

Two variants worth knowing. Drop the conjunctions entirely and you get asyndetonThe lock turned, the door swung in, the hall was empty. Repeat them past the point of need and you get polysyndetonand the lock turned and the door swung in and the hall was empty. Same clauses, three different speeds.

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